Jennifer McKenzie
Romance--Boy meets girl. Romantic Suspense--Boy meets girl with dead bodies.
Thursday, May 18, 2006
Got Some Done
I managed to get about five thousand words written today. Justin took the boys to the park and I put on Evanescence and Linkin Park and got writing. As a result, I'm in the middle of chapter six rewrite.The story is totally different now. I've added a more compelling reason why Travis would believe that Jessica may have murdered her father. The relationship between them is less stiff and more believeable than in the first version. There is a lot more of them together and that is improving the story.
I've gotten 15K of the rewrites done. I've taken out some of the problem areas and worked out the time sense better. The story is getting less ponderous and more interesting. Changing the name really has made a difference. I thank all who came up with names to choose from. I'm so awful with titles.
Romance Divas (see my links) is having a Query contest. I've done judging on ten of them. I initially wanted to pass on the judging because my queries are so awful. Gina checked out a couple I judged and said it was fine. *Shrugs* I'm in.
Thank you so much to all who gave encouragement. I've needed it.
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